Thanks for great review!!
Thank you for your feedback with encouraging comments as always!
Teacher David san Thank you for your kind and detailed explanations for my questions. I see that the tip-words are "a contrast" and "the same time." I couldn't agree with you more, who say it's hard to say clearly due to its subtlety and multiple meanings. Meanwhile, "eliminating grades" sounds interesting to me, because I came up with the collocation of "abandon grades" at first. Thank you again for your informative edits.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present perfect is better in the latter part of the 4 the sentence like “they have started earlier in April.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am sorry to confuse you with my sentences. I use two ointments and there are some scars and cuts.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ turn the show off” is better in the last sentence.
Thank you for your suggestions. They are helpful for me. And my daughter belongs to exactly a school orchestra which has string instruments. In japan, a school orchestra is rarer than a school band,too.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ take off the cover.”
Thank you for your correction and comments.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ him” is necessary in the 4th sentence like …”give him the bulb.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good expression “ …perched among the flowers.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ the screw’s hole” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ from” is necessary in the third sentence.like “ …accidents from using a smartphone.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “I heard one of them say… “ I am sorry the last word was a mistake. I meant it was a “Satan”.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ in” is necessary in the second sentence like “ put it back