Thank you for your feedback with encouraging comments. Your corrections are very helpful to identify where to improve!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a group that sings funny songs.”
Thank you for your feedback. I’ll do my best next time as well. Have a good one!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the best word in this context “ puddles.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ since I started joining” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to put “ when I visited my hometown” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good expression like “ the ratio between the perceived horizontal and vertical width of the mouth of the cup.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ fish for crayfish”.
Thank you very much for your comment and the kind amendment to my writing. I will keep on practicing writing for my business use and my hobby. I hope to see you soon! Wish you have a great day ahead.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ keep the elevator door open” in the second sentence is better.
Hello David, Thank you so much for your corrections, explanations and comments. They are really helpful for me! I will keep it up!! Best regards, Kimiyo
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the most appropriate word in my first sentence “ perspective.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past tense is better in the 1-2nd sentence like …measured…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ multiple f dishes.”
Thanks for great review!!
