Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean it’s better to say “ from daytime to nighttime” in the first sentence.
Very helpful!
Thank you as always.
Hi David, I couldn't notice my misspelling. Thank you for pointing them out. I will see you soon!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean it’s better to say “ with a net on a pole” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean it’s better to say “ I could hardly manage to swim” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean it’s better to say “ the number of dead cicadas is increasing” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your feedback with informative corrections and comments as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean it’s better to say “ our skin cannot breathe in such clothes “ in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean the better expression “ regret having given it to him” in the fifth sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean its bette to say “ pictures that look similar to the subject” in the 5th sentence.
Dear David san Thank you for your prompt edits and informative answers. You may have needed patience for answgering to my messy questions. " A less casual option is citizens' belongings." I see, "belongings" can be used in this formality, besides an announcement in the train not to forget my belongings. "The government does not have the right to demolish homes and dispose of the rubble." I've newly learned two words in this sentence. How powerful these are:demolish and rubble, referring to pulling down a building and bits of broken bricks. "-describes what happens to all abandoned homes" I see. It is quite natural that my phrasing has been taken for this way. I understand this wordings: there's no specific name for Russia, China, and North Korea and versus some other countries. And "western countries" doesn't apply to Japan because Japan is an Eastern/Asian country. This is correct and the more for the fact, interests me. Thank you again. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean its bette to say “ it would not heal naturally” in the fourth sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to lean its bette to say “ took the SD card out of my computer” in the first sentence.
Thank you!
