Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …Can you lend me a mechanical pencil” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …they might have been damaged” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ They were due that day” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “kilograms” is one word.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ accept myself as I am” in the last sentence.
Thank you so much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ not real fights.”
Thank you for your feedback. you offered me a lot of alternative expressions. They are so helpful that I will use them in the future essays!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use the phrase “ I used to think …” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the last sentence should be in the present perfect like “ I have never been satisfied…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition is almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “cowboy hats.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use “ a conditional perfect” like it must have been the reincarnation of my father.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ by having faith until my death” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your feedback and suggestions to make my sentences flow more naturally.
