Thank you for your feedback with very much informative corrections as always!
Thank you for your work!
Dear Teacher David san Thank you for your alternative sentences that sound sophisticated.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ as they are” is not necessary in the second sentence.
Thank you very much, David. You answered my question perfectly! I'm glad you got what I wanted to say. I will try to use the words appropriately, but correct them again if I make a mistake. Enjoy the rest of this weekend!
Hello, David. How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections make sense to me. I have made many easy mistakes, but actually, I'm a little bit confused to see that you added "," between "just" and "considered" " his claim was just, considered as a personal opinion." I hope to see you soon again. Take care! Kind regards, Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say” I was told I could get” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say” I often suddenly receive a message” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad that you remind me that the definite article is necessary before good old days and I should say “ the good old days.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “100 points is the best and it’s a perfect score in my rating” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “before I lost them” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ I am careful that they do not choke” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “Gas prices ” are better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “eat at home” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “for the first time in a long time” in the last sentence.
