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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the last sentence should be in the future tense like “ I will be happy …”
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ from the classroom to a bench” in the first sentence.
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Hello, David. How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. I think it might sound stupid, but I have been getting more superstitious than when I was younger. I sincerely hope Setsubunn gives me a good luck. I hope you will have another good year as well, David. Take care! Kind regards, Yoko
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