Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary. I was surprised your response was so fast! You're wonderful. Actually, I can't understand when a wore need an article. So your support is very helpful for me. Thank you very much. Thank you for reading. See you soon.:)
Thank you for correcting my diary, David! I was happy when you told me, 'That app sounds helpful and very interesting!' Yeah, I believe that I'm gong to get high score of TOEIC if I know a lot of English words. I'll do my best!! Thank you very much! See you soon!:)
Hello David, Thank you for correcting my English in a very nice way. That became an extremely useful resource for me!
Hi David-san, Thank you for your thoughtful comments as always. Thank you so much for praising my English that arouses my enthusiasm. See you soon. Tommy,
Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary. Actually, I can't understand between 'as' and 'when' in this case but I'm glad 'when' is natural in this case. Thank you. I'm going to work as night shift. Have a great week, too!:)
Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary! Ah, Tokyo changes 'that city' in this case, I was impressive. I guess if 'the city', someone maybe won't understand 'my city' or 'Tokyo'. I see. Thank you for reading! See you soon!:)
Thank you for your revewing. Writing an essay is beneficial for me not only learning English but also thinking about many interesting topics one more time. Thank you as always. Tommy,
I am impressed to read your comment on the 4th sentence of my work. The expression of your 2nd option is closer to what I want to say. Thank you very much for special kindness.
Hi, David-san, Thank you for your corrections as always. After I wrote an essay, I felt I would like to try virtual reality in the near future. Arigatougozaimashita. See you. Tommy,
I am grateful for your quick and deliberate fixing on my sentences!
Hi, David-san, Thank you again for your corrections. How to use comma and semi comma to separate sentences properly is still troublesome for me. Anyway, I keep in mind that persistence pays off, because I am a learner. See you.
I am glad the teacher commented on my esssay.
Hi, David-san. Thank you for your corrections again and explanation as well. I believe that practice makes perfect and it is beneficial to proofread my writing by native spearks. See you. Arigatougozaimashita.
Thank you very much!
Thank you for you modifications. My sentence became more natural. Arigatougozaimashita.
