
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition was almost perfect.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “ the present perfect” is better in the first sentence.

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Dear David, I am sorry for confusing you about the intention of “Access”. Also, I appreciate your feedback. Best regards, Shota

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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean to say “ in high school” without any articles.”

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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ …say his or her name” in the 6th sentence.

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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean you say “ on my birthday every year.”

Dear David Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean you say “ Rakuten physical cards.”

Dear David, Thank you for your some useful changes to me. In the last sentence, I would like to express my thought about gender. I think that the gender of each person is depending on everone's thought in society. However, the sex as human beings is not changed by their thought. I will continue to try to express my thought clearly in English. Sincerely, Bearmatsu

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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean you say “ the Sacraments.”