Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to have learned the active voice is better than the passive voice for the second sentence like “strangers might find out ...”
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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am sorry I made a mistake in the first sentence. This story was about the time when my father died. SoI should have written “ my mother and I” rushed to my father’s hospital where my father was hospitalized, withought my father.
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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to have learned it is not a period but comma like “1,896.” In the first sentence “in” is corrected like “ in.” In the last sentence “ more” is corrected like “ more.” I wonder why they both are corrected, even though there is no change.
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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to have learned “ a” is necessary in front of marathon like “ a marathon.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad you suggest “ I have to put on my coat over my jacket to walk outside.” You are right. I should have written it this way as it is habitual.
Thank you so much for your reviews. Your explanations aobut why the ammendments are needed are so clear that I was able to understand. Your advises of various expressions should be helpful. I learned a lot from your lesson. Thank you.
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