Thank you again, David! It was my first time to hear the word "inflatable pool." We call it "vinyl pool" in Japan. I've also learned that it is better not to omit a relative pronoun. I will request you soon.
Hello, David. How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm flattered to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback and comments on how I can use each wording better!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn The present perfect is better with the third sentence like “The scar I gave him has remained for his whole life.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ I got a debit card” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ hit my friend’s head with an aluminum hubcap” in the first sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for your checking my essay. I believe your comment will greatly help me learn English. I hope that l have another chance to have you read my writing. Best,
Thank you always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the good idiom “ for the first time in a long while.”
What a quick response, Mr.David! Seriously?! I wrote the composition correctly? Cozyyyyy!! It was the only point I was disappointed. I will keep writing, so could you please not be tired of my composition? Thank you so much for your efforts!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the past perfect is better in the first sentence like…that had been thrown away...
Thank you as always!
Thank you so much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn you say “ the bank transfer fee” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your quick reply, Mr.David! I'm jelous about the temperature over there, but be careful of the heat. I had several misspelling again. "Diary" in my message was also the one. I'm learning a lot from your correction every time. Hope you have a nice weekend too!
