
Thank you for correcting my composition. Since you introduced me many alternative expressions, I really enjoyed reviewing it. Thanks again and see you next time!

Dear David, Thank you very much for your precise corrections and detailed explanations. I particularly appreciate your explanation on the possessive in the first sentence. I knew the both ways are correct, but was not sure which is more preferable, so your comment was a great hint to me! I'll send you my next piece soon. Have a nice evening. Sincerely, nmkh

Thank you for your fast edition. I am glad to learn “ erupt” is better than “ rose” in the last sentence.

Thank you for your fast edition. I am glad to learn the good expression “ I was cheating”.

Thank you so much for your correction as always!!

Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments! I would like to practice using "in addition to" in my future writings.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn I should have described “competed to see how high...”

Thank you for your correction and kind comments! I will also rewrite my compositions with correct grammar which you showed me :) I always appreciate your help!

Thank you so much for your correction. Yes, I wanted to mean that I will never sacrifice any of my sleep in the future! Thank you David san.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn you say “ athletic” and “the runner in first.“

Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments! This morning, my girls received a frozen parcel which they had ordered before; it was two pounds of dry tapioca pearls and I was amazed to see their enthusiasm to bubble tea!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ pressure” is no countable.

Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments! I'm glad to know that my first sentence sounded very natural to you! I always learn a lot from you!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “the past tense” is better than “the past perfect” in the second sentence.

Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments! I was sure whether I need "about" or not in the forth sentence, after "let me know," so I am glad to know the right form of the sentence! Please let me excuse for today, and I will submit next composition tomorrow!