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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’ s better to say “Chrismas card.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’ s better to say “ get a long enough nap.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’ s better to say “ gestured to me.”
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’ s better to say “ it ‘s up to us whether to give…”
Thank you for your feedback and corrections as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the phrase “ set it to automatic” and the setting should be in the plural like “settings.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it should be “ see…on the larger screen” in the last sentence.
Thank you for a quick reply, teacher David. I did it! Haruko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it should be “ four thousand” in the singular.
Hello, David. How are you? Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. I'm happy to read your nice comment, too. This year, we have been experiencing unusually warm weather in Japan. It's nice to spend time outside and also good for the plants' growth in my yard, but, I'm a bit afraid of that it could be one of the signs of global warming. I know I could stay OK when I do what I should do to maintain healthy environment. Have a nice weekend. Bye for now Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ coronavirus shot.”
Thank you for your feedback and comments that I found very useful as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ coronavirus shot.”
