Dear David, Thank you for giving great examples. They are really helpful. Yes, I will try a new composition assignment soon! Best regards, Ebiharumaki
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say …”it was slightly windy “ in the second sentence.
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the present tense is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the preposition should be “ on” like “on a school excursion.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ part of the roof had come off” in the past perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to use the past perfect in the second sentence after the past main-sentence like “I found the electric plug had come out…”
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to use the past perfect in the last sentence after the past in the sub sentence. The last sentence is perfect. I am sorry the last sentence was incomplete.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ …in my car” in the second sentence.”
Dear David san Thank you for your useful advice. I found the word "trait" in the novel "Pride and Prejudice." A man in the novel has a piculiar habit. It was taken as one of his family traits. I looked it up in my dictionary and found an usagae of "national trait" amd "English trait." Then I tried to use this word meaning one of featuers of a country that are influenced by the local culture and values. Best regards,
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ …includes the last judgement.”M
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ all of my female coworkers.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the present perfect is better in the first sentence.
