Thank you for your correction and comments. Yes, I agreed with what my daughter said. I've been learning really a lot by getting your correction and advice. You are a great teacher!
Thank you for your correction and comments. Your suggestion "bring too many things to school" is right; I didn't write it as I was not sure if I could repeat "school" in the same sentence, but I learned it was necessary.
you are a great tutor. thank you again.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned it’s better to say “some of my money,” not my money in the first sentence.
Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments. I'm relieved to hear that my intention was clear in this composition!
Thank you so much for your correction!!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned ATM need the indefinite article “ a” like an ATM.
Thank you for your correction and kind comments. I've learned a lot!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned you do not say “ pierce- whistle.”
Thank you so much for your correction!!
Thank you so much for your correction!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned the more common expression “ Today’s such a nice day.
Thank you for your correction and your kind words! I was so happy to receive today's correction result. I keep leaning!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned “ I hear some sparrows chirping” is more common.
Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments. I have learned to say "a reservation for SB."
