Thank you for a lot of pieces of your kind advice. I've been inspired by them in many aspects. Among these inspirations, let me write one below. I like this sentence you wrote: "This is not the best way to achieve this goal." I wrote: "However, that is a matter of publicity." I often and unconsciously use abstract words. But, these are hard to understand. And I write many steps of my thinking. But, there's no need to follow these steps. You wrote:"They intend to make paternity leave more popular, but there are better ways to achieve that." This one sentence does well instead of many sentences I wrote. Thank you.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the progressive is better in the second sentence like “…was pressuring me…”
Thank you, happy new year to you, too!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ my pleasures.”
Thank you very much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the better phase in the last sentence” from now on.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “newspaper”is a one word.
Hello, David. How are you doing? Thank you for the corrections you made on my submission. I appreciate you for the quick response, so, I can review the essay while it's fresh. It seems like you understood what I meant to say, I'm very happy. Especially, the last sentence; you gave me back "I just feel uneasy and even have a fear of being incapable of adapting to more new technologies" That's exactly the meaning I wrote. 2023 is just around the corner. I hope you will have a good holiday to cerebrate the new year. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback with encouraging comments!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “driveway” is a one word.
Thank you !
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn snow blower is not one word but two words. A repairman sounds fine to me. Actually, there is a man in my church in charge of checking the snow blower.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ set the temperature properly.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the word frustration is in the singular.
Thank you for your feedback and encouraging comments as always. I found them very helpful to improve my writings.
