Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ junk mail” in the singular.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ lazy” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn you say “ during a rest.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “siren” should be in the plural in this case like with sirens sounding.”
Thank you for feedback and corrections that helps me to understand how I can improve my sentences as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the article is necessary before Sacrament like “ the Sacrament.”
Dear David, Thank you for giving great examples. They are really helpful. Yes, I will try a new composition assignment soon! Best regards, Ebiharumaki
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say …”it was slightly windy “ in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the present tense is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the preposition should be “ on” like “on a school excursion.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ part of the roof had come off” in the past perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to use the past perfect in the second sentence after the past main-sentence like “I found the electric plug had come out…”
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to use the past perfect in the last sentence after the past in the sub sentence. The last sentence is perfect. I am sorry the last sentence was incomplete.
