Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use “ share” than “ tell” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say …” prioritize my own matter over…’
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition was almost perfect.
Thank you for your feedback and corrections that I found very informative as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ admitted to “ in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ without much sleep.”
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a Windows computer.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ the entire floor” in the last sentence
Hello David, Thank you for your super quick feedback with full of advice , comments and wide variety of similar expressions. I was impressed by your dedication. I learnt a lot and feel I can in the future from you, and will definitely come back to you after studying with other teachers. See you next time Hama-chan
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “I am afraid of being 〜” is better.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ the” is necessary like “ the Roman Empire.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it is better to say “…the amount of tax that would be charged me…” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it is better to say “That was in the good old days” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it is better to say “ on my computer” in the third sentence.
