Hi Teacher David Thank you so much for correcting my composition. I would like to become an excellent writer in English because I am very good at writing Japanese.The gap between my Japanese writing skill and English skill is unlikely to amend so instantly. However,I will keep going, never give up to improve my English. I am looking forward to your checking my writing someday soon!!1
Dear Teacher David, Thank your very much for your feedback. Those are great help to enlarge my phrases and English skills as well. Also, Your gave me answer of my question. It's great! I got what I had wanted to. I am really enjoy to see a YouTube video of "Moana review". Thanks to your advice, I have learned different meaning between "impression" and "review". I always appreciate all your useful options and comments. Okd2016
I am glad that you made my essay sound natural.
Hello David, Thank you for reading my essay. Your words really encouraged me. I'll be more careful about the distinction "less" and "fewer".
Thank you so much!
The use of "slim", such as "slim chance" is a new one for me. I have memorized it. I think it is very useful. Thanks a lot, David!
Thank you very much for correcting my assignment. Also, I’'m happy to get beneficial comments from you.
Hello David! Thank you for correcting my diary. I'm happy when you tells me a lot of natural words. Thank you very much. I'll learn English my best with your comment and I hope my boyfriend to see a lot of sites in South Korea. See you soon and Happy New Year!:)
Hello, David!! Thank you very much for correcting my diary. I am sorry that I'm too late about my responce! I am glad because I could write good English somehow. I was surprised that you corrected the word; 'have a drinking competition'. I saw 'competition' for the first time and it's very useful. Thank you. See you soon and Happy New Year!
Dear David, Thank you for all your feedbacks and answer of my questions. I was able to easily imagine of diference between "contain" and "include". Beside on this, I found that "X include Y" is without "in" ,thanks to your comments. I also have mistook that it's not "bergen" ,but "bargain". And I'm pleased to hear of Canada's big sales day "Boxing day". It's first time to hear of the 26th day in Canada. Knowing other country's custom would be great help for me to learning English more widely. Best regards, Okd2016
Happy new year!
Dear Teacher David, I really appreciate your feedbacks. All your feedbacks help me understanding what natural sentences are. Especially, I have had some phrases to express correctly and precisely. Beside this, I was very surprised to see that you used Japanese "は" in your answer of my question. That works very very effectively for me to learn about specific parse "As for". I would like to thank you for all your considerate coaching in this year. Okd2016
David san, Thank you for your detailed explanations and many tips. Take care of cold weather in Canada. See you soon. Tommy,
Thank you.
I am on a train, going to play golf at the foot of Mt. Fuji with my friends. I have read your editited sentences and encouraging guidance with joy. Thank you so much!
