
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ the Parthenon on the acropolis.”

Thank you for your super fast edition.

Thank you very much for your corrections and clear explanations. It is nice to know that expressions, "speak in public" or "say something in public". Your comments are easy to understand and help me a lot. I wish I would like to know more about natural phrases. Thank you!

Hi David, Thank you for your corrections. I've learned a lot from you. new vocabulary familiarity with something the speed and stability ( that was exactly what I wanted to say, and it's not comfort ) Who/Where/ How sentences can be the subject in the sentence! ( I will try to use soon ! ) the / a / an are still my difficulties, but little by little I came to understand thank to you. etc. I didn't mean you are bad, it's me... Don't be sorry! In the morning, I can't study English unless I finish off all my duties like cleaning floor and bathroom, taking out garbage, washing dishes after making breakfast, and defrosting meet or fish after deciding the dinner menu, you name it. hahaha.. But when I reach your availability, I'm sure to ask you again... Take care ! Have a nice day! Yukiko

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …asking my fellow believers about it” in the last sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ shorts” not pants in the first sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you can say “ he was flatlining.

Dear Teacher David san Thank you for your corrections, which are nice and timely as usual. > -- "resonating between us" describes a relationship between the people in the group "us." Instead, we want to indicate a relationship between us and "Birds Aren't Real" (which isn't included in the group "us"). = I see. I didn't clearly recognize this point. Now I understand that it is important where the resonating happens, inside ourselves or relation with the movement and us. Best Regards, ie1133 ----------

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …in my studying” in the first sentence.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …apologized for giving me a wrong combo…”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s okay to say in the past tense in the third sentence like “ Since then, I studied…”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a custom of drinking…”

Hi David, How are you doing? I'm sorry I am late for sending you stars. Today, I checked your advice neatly. Thanks to you, I understand how to differentiate from "which/that" and "where" judging who take an action with the following verb. Honestly it was complicated every time, so it was so helpful. I played with words you gave me below.....hahaha... 【【 An ill-mannered legislator putting on an ill-fitting shirt which was ill-gotten is always ill-tempered to get the government program and appointed ill-timed to express views, finally he is said to be ill-advised. 】】 Just for my practice....but I think there are these kinds of Japanese legislators based on reality... hahaha.. See you soon ! Yukiko

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ my words…” in the last sentence.

Hi David, I'm sorry to be behind giving stars to you. I appreciate your decent correction of my writing. When I wrote my essay, I didn't realize anything. After reading your advice, I came to understand what I was saying and I couldn't help laughing with my sentences like "I would make staff keep clean" and " to raise up the unemployed rate". I feel ashamed a bit, but happy that I've absorbed correct expressions at the same time. Thank for all your support. See you later, Yukiko