
Hello David, The other day, I visited a department store and saw an ugly scene, that was a few days before the Valentine's day. A young girl and her boy friend was choosing a package of chocolate. There were surprisingly expensive, lavish chocolates only, and I thought who would buy such an absurd priced package. She said " which one would be nice?" in a sweet tone of voice, pretending she, herself, would pay money to buy some. But, I knew she was pestering her boyfriend for chocolate and certainly she knew he would. She seemed like just an innocent teenage girl, but looked like a professional hostess at a bar. What a pity boy! He was trapped. Thank you for the corrections. I enjoy reading them. I learnt many things from the line 4, Thank you. I'm looking forward to seeing you again. Take care, Yoko

Teacher Mr. David san Thank you very much for your many pieces of advice. The difference "odor" versus "perfume/cologne" interests me much. And "deodorant" does too. "I found his cologne overwhelming." It is my first time to see to express strong smell using "overwhelming." I am interested in it. "The garbage was giving off a very unpleasant odor." "Give off" is a strange phrasal verb to me because in Japanese we have no verb to be used good smell and bad smell. In your answer to my question, I know that you have been in Japan several times. I am glad to know that you like travelling in Japan. I hope you have good memories of Japan.

Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful. I will be more careful about when to use determiners.

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Thank you for your feedback. I did not expect that you knew about the JR Group companies. Did you look them up online, or did you learn about them from your Japanese textbooks? As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful as they included new words!

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