Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present is better than the progress like “the guts come out of their bodies.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn no articles with “world history.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say” delinquent boys threatened to hurt me” in the first sentence.
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Hi, David, Thank you for the very quick response.I learnt many things from your correction. "Card" is a countable noun, so, it should use "few" instead of "less". I hope you have a great day. See you next time. Yoko
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ the breaker turned off.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ exchange something for something.”
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Thank you for your feedback. You have polished my sentences.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ valid” rather than “validated.”
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say in the last sentence like “ but I keep it with me just in case of rain. “
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present tense is better in the last sentence like “ When snow falls on the remaining…”
