Thank you for your helpful corrections, as always. Best regards,
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Dear David Thank you for your kind feedback! I'm happy to read your heartwarming message. Have a wonderful day!!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy I have learned your edition “ is not synchronized with.”
Teacher David san Thank you for your quick answer. I understand your explanations. >You discussed a variety of aspects of this problem clearly in your composition. = Thank you very much for your favorable sentences. Your words let me flatter myself. I would like people in African nations to realize that nothing should be thought of prior to daily life in peace, increase in income and universal election. ----- >"I think the easiest way to reduce malnutrition in these countries is by improving their economies." = I like this sentence. ------ >I would avoid using "downturns" in this situation-----this isn't a recent change. = I see and agree with you. ----- >3) "See the slight touch of" is not a natural expression; instead, we say "we cannot see even a slight sign/hint that they will end." We say there is "a sign/hint that (this will happen)" -------- = I see. "See the slight touch of" is a collocation in Japanese. ----- >After that, Japan has rebuilt everything and later Japan was said to be "Number One." > I would say "and later Ezra Vogel praised Japan in his book 'Japan as Number One.'" > It's necessary to introduce the title ------- = Thank you for guessing. What you guessed is right. I understand I have skipped necessary words. My excuse is that recently I skip words for money saving in order to reduce the number of words which I use in IDIY. (Joking.) ------- >"initiative" is a countable noun here, ------ > In comparison, "initiative" is uncountable when it refers to the ability to act first on your own, without being told what to do first ("Good employees must have initiative"). = The word"initiative" interests me. This has a different meaning when it is used either as countable word or as uncountable one. I have noticed this double-meaning word a while ago and have been paying an attention. "Initiative" has been already introduced into Japanese for a long time, but only with the meaning in "uncountable." Therefore, I did not know the meaning in "countable." In this IDIY task, it is my first time to use this word in countable. I was worried whether "peace initiatives"(I see it must be plural.) sound natural. I am happy to see it is OK. ------- Thank you for telling me a lot of useful tips including: "we cannot see even a sign that (this will happen)," "It's raining heavily and there isn't even a slight sign of it stopping." "nature," "It is important for us to introduce green initiatives to protect nature." "introduce (someone) to (something)," "She introduced me to her best friend." "In a democratic economy, elections have a big impact on business." "(something) is a different story," "People generally pay little attention to sports like running and swimming, but the Olympics are another story." "do X by doing Y," "peace initiatives." ----------------
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy I have learned phrase “ made eye contact.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy I have learned you write “ watercolor.”
Dear David, Thank you always for checking my email. I have understood the points that you indicated in my email. I hope you have a good day tomorrow! Best regards, Shota
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy I have learned that “ I would swim more slowly” is better.
Hello! The sentences you suggested ware really useful for me. Thank you very much for your great advice!
Thanks Mr.David, always. I could recognize my huge missunderstanding about the meaning of 'would rather' this time lol Your comment was very helpful for me as usual, thanks!! Have a good day!! Ryo
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to have learned “ play around” is not suitable for adults.
Dear David, Thank you so much for your work. I really appreciate the corrections you gave me. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to have learned gum should be in the plural like “ gums.”
Dear David Thank you for your nice message to me everytime! Have a wonderful day!!
