Hi! Thank you for your comments on my writing. "They" actually means Senators, so you are correct. Thanks!
Thank you for your super fast edition and I am happy that you correctly changed to “so” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition and I am happy to have learned “ come towards” is better.
Thank you for your polite correction!
Thank you for your super fast edition and I am happy you added the article in the first sentence.
Thank you.
Thank you very much for corrections and advices again! They are very helpful and I am motivated to learn English ever than before.
Thank you for your super fast edition and I am happy I have learned the correct expression “ swung and missed my fastballs.”
Thank you for your super fast edition and I have learned you say “ the course of the curve.”
Dear David, Thank you very much for your kind feedback. I am always motivated to study by your words! I'm looking forward to sending you more of my work soon. Kind regards, nmkh
Thank you for your super fast edition and I have learned the plural is better like curveballs, screwballs and forkballs.
Thank you so much for your correction!!!
Thank you for your super fast edition and letting me know I missed the word “if” in the third sentence.
Dear David-Sensei Thank you very much as always for your kind explanation. I'm not really used to writing English, so it is very difficult for me. So I really appreciate your feedbacks. I would like to work hard and learn a lot in your guidance.
Thank you for your quick review. Describing the food was fun, but it would have been even better if I could have eaten it.