Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present tense is better in the 5th sentence like” It is too cold these days…”
hank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past perfect is better in the 4th sentence like “ It had become stale.”
Thank you for your corrections and comments!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past. “ tried” is better like tried to leave…
Thank you for your feedback and corrections that always give me a lot of supports to improve my writing skill!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the better order of the words in the first sentence “ another deacon and I”.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ I worry about it” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good phrase “ the covid restrictions.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am sorry that I confused you about the first sentence. Actually, I threw it away once. But I felt guilty so I picked it up and brought it back home. But I liked your edition about the first sentence as it sounded good to me.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ garbage cans.”
Thank you for your work!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ waste money on the food” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the phrase “ exit the driveway.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the phrase “ less impactful.”
Thank you for your prompt review. Scenery photo description is a big fun to me.
