Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the sentence “ I was told I could come to the dental clinic with 15 minutes” is better.
Hello, David, how are you? As always I' m happy to hear from you. Thank you the corrections you made on my essay. When I read your corrections I can see if my writings make sense to the reader. It's a great help for my English study. This time, I noticed from your correction which is for the 4th sentence. We can't live happy with others in a tight space, much less pet animals. We can't live happily with others in a tight space, much less with pets. I meant to say, 'we can't live happily with others in a tight space, and pets also can't live happily with humans in a tight space. See you next time, and bye until then. Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that you reminds me that the past of “ cost” is cost.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use the relative pronoun “ that” in the last sentence like “ The event that the Christian Pentecost celebrates.”
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ after changing into my nurse uniform” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to use “ be reprimanded ” in the last sentence. I am sorry to make you unsure about the sentence. I wrote this composition while I was wearing the black socks at work.
Thank you very much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say“ among hills” in the fourth sentence.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say“ the other church members.”
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences were very useful!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ the azaleas” is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the better expression like “ my weight would drop below….”
Thank you so much for checking my writing, David san. Your comment pointing out which phrases sounded natural was very encouraging as I’ve never had a chance to have my writings checked this way!
