Thank you for your feedback and comments that encourage me as always!
Thank you again for correcting my writing! Your corrections are always clear to me. I will try to find my time to use IDIY to improve my writing ability. Thanks as always.
Dear David san Thank you for your corrections. I'm very delighted to read your comment saying " I'm impressed by the verb phrase "should always be finding." Great job!" "To be more attractive to tourists to compete against other major cities worldwide" I see, an expression using verbs is more understandable than that using an adjective. A verb is strong and clear. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition is almost perfect.
Thank you very much.
Thank you, as usual.
Thank you, as usual.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the right phrase “ slide down.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I have learned the right word “ cursor.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. It’s better to say “ some people” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. It should be like “ in Word on my Windows computer.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. In the last sentence, after colon, “ there are “ Is necessary like there are iPhone-stands everywhere here and there in my rooms.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am sorry I made a mistake in the third sentence : that she was wearing a tight skirt, not shirt. But it is okay as the sentence does not make a big difference.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ a long time” is better than “ many times” in the fourth sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the last if-sentence should be in the present.”
