Thank you for your quick response. I have learned "the past perfect" is better than the past tense in the second sentence like ...one that "had taken" one bite of...
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know "reward " is better than "praise" in the second sentence. I myself wondered which was better, reward or praise. As I wanted to make sure whether "praise" was acceptable, I wrote "praise."
Thank you for your quick reply. I wanted to use "a verb for delusion," but I did not know the verb, so I used the noun "delusion" like I had a delusion.
Thank you for your quick responce and correction. I am glad to know the present tense "bend" is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know it should be "be opened," not "open" in the second sentence.
Thank you for your quick reply. I wanted to know whether you understood my eassy completely. If there is something you are not sure about, I would like you to tell me please.
Thank you for correcting my answer! I liked how you rephrased "pets are~ and being provided for every need" into "and every need is provided for". I've also looked up the word "overtake". ("overtake somebody/something" ~to become greater in number, amount or importance than something else.) I've realised it includes comparison, and may have different nuances in the sentence where I used. So it is better how you edited. Thank you!
Thank you for your quick responce. I am sorry that I misspelled "fingers for figures." In the last sentence it should have been "A bar chart with my weight "figures(numbers)."
Hello Mr. David, Thank you very much for getting back to me so quickly, as usual. I'm happy that I did quite(?) well. Your comments encouraged me a lot. Thank you! Best regards, Isabel
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know "sports clothes" are better than sport clothes. Also, I am glad to know "went" is better than came because I wrote this composition after leaving the gym.
Thank you for editing my short statement! I practiced this essay again with your corrections. I wasn't sure if I used the words right, so it was nice to hear! I just do not know if "things" ("these things have negative impacts") can be used in an exam essay, and I wasn't sure about that.
Thank you for your quick reply.
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay promptly. This trip to Egypt is one of the most unforgettable ones for me. I hope ISIS don't expand its power to the country and devastate the historic buildings any more. Have a great sunday! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hello David, Thank you for your correction and message! I'm glad to hear that this time there was no mistake in my writing. Also, I appreciate a variety of phrases you gave me for the description! Thank you very much for your help as always! I'm looking forward to the next time. Miho
Thank you for your quick answer. I am glad that I was able to understand that we should not write sentences that is redundant and understandable in the situation.
