Teacher David san Thank you for your prompt answer to my question. Your advice is informative, specific and concise. It is very kind of you to show me alternative expressions that are useful to remember to improve my expressive style. "On top of that, the economy benefits from the tobacco industry." I see how to use "benefit." "For these reasons, the government should cover the cost of cleaning up this trash, not tobacco companies." I like "cover the cost. " Best regards,
Hello, David. Thank you for your revision! I am glad there is nothing needs to be changed^^
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the word “ powdery.”
Thank you for your work!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the good phrase “ came out from around the counter.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “a” is necessary before hard time like “ a hard time.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the phrase “ where the bed is.”
Thank you for your kindly suggestion.
Thank you for your useful feedback with encouraging comments!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ the time” rather than “time” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean it’s better to say “ ended up wasting that time” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “the past” is better than “ the present perfect” in the first sentence.
Is a “ closing prayer” a natural English?
Thank you for your feedback with suggestions for more natural explanations!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “the day’s work” is better than “ today’s work” in the first sentence.
