
Thank you your super fast edtion. I am glad I have learned that I should have used “lengths” as I was refrerring to multiple dimensions.

I really appreciate for your kind Comments,it makes me more passonaite about English.

Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad to be able to cofirm there is no article before “shading” like put “ shading.”

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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am sorry that I have confused you with water bathtubs. I just translated what we call it in Japanese literally in English. What I mesn by Water bathtubs is cold bathtubs. Usally the water in bathtubs is hot but in what we call water bathtubs the water is as cold as the drinking water ( not heated). I hope you understand my explanation.

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Thank you very much for your corrections. I’m surprised that I didn’t make a lot of mistakes. I’m also happy to read your comments that my essay was clear enough. Thank you very much for encouraging me a lot,too.

Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad to know the right way to say: “be close to running out” rather than “run short.”

Hello Teacher David, Thank you for your corrections and many paraphrastic expressions! It's first time to see the expression "Last but not least." It was a great learning opportunity. Thanks for everything! Yuki-02

Dear David, Thank you for the correction and sorry for the late reply. I'm happy you liked the long noun phrase "black-and-white friend" and that you found it as impressive while I was not confident about this expression. I also appreciate for all alternative ideas and phrases. Especially, I liked the phrase "I had trouble communicating with my parents, but never with her." that beautifully represents what I wanted to express. And about articles and past perfect! You cleared my unresolved questions that have been obscure to me for a long time. Regarding articles, I may still have difficulties, but for past perfect, I may work better thanks to your advice. Thank you for answering to my question of usage of "experience". I wanted to say the machine model has a stable and long operational history and is pleased by many customers. I will try to find a better word / expression. Thank you so much! I will ask you again for the correction and advice. Best regards, Asouka

Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad that I could make sure it is OK to say “make food last until the next point day.”

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Thank you very much for your corrections, comments and reply for my question. I’m a bit surprised that both the present perfect and the past perfect sound good for you in that sentence. I understood that I don’t need to worry too much about such tenses. I hope my understanding is correct. I’ll use the present perfect tense for that sentence next time. Thank you very much again and best regards, Isabel

Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad I have learned “ to” is unnecessary in the sentence: I was appointed a board member.

Thank you for reading my short essay! The options you suggested are very helpful for me!