Thank you for reading my short essay! The alternative sentences you suggested are very helpful!
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know you say a “spatula” instead of “blade.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am sorry to have confused you with my misspelling. It is not a fried cheese noodle party, it should be fried “Chinese” noodle (Yakisoba) party.
Thank you for your wonderful correction, and I was very glad to find a photo something like a nutria again.
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know you can say either “ the boats were floating in the sea” or “the boats were floating on the sea.”
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know “ it make sense” makes sense in my sentence.
Thank you very much!
Thank you checking my writing ,giving me a kind comment and also showing me examples useing the expressions. Your sincere checking encourages me and let me notice how careless I was in writing English like "severe" and "fur". I'm looking forward to next time.
Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad to find out you say “ eat much oil” not “take much oil. “
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know you say “ a paintings by an artist,” not a painting of an artist.”
Thank you!
Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to know “ learning how to drew pictures” is better than “ learning drewing pictures.” By the way I thought you were on a vacation.
Thank you as always, David! I really appreciate your work.
Mr,David. Thank you very much for your reply and answering my question! Your clear expectations helped me a lot. I wil try to study harder! Thank you very much！ I’ll write you again! Take care（＾_＾）makiko
Thank you for your fast edtion. I am glad to know” it is troubling” is more common than “it troubles me.”
