Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the past perfect is better like “ I had worked much longer….“in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the phrase “a message, saying …” is better in the 4th sentence. You
Thank you so much, David. I liked the last sentence. I will write next composition soon! Have a good one!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “which way of drawing was better “ should be better in the first sentence.
Thank you very much.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say …”his envelop with his monthly donation to our church” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your corrections and comments that are helpful to improve my writing skill as always!
Dear David san Thank you, as ever, for your informative advices. I see the two types of collocatios for "end." I love some more options you kindly extended about how the artist made his intention understood. I see how to use "fund" and "donation", and the tense in "if" clouse. I see how to express the special measuring way in comparison with an usual one. I'm glaod I was able to use "sprit" and "sense of humor" correctly. Thank you again for your extensive alternatives.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say …”discounted the original price of nine million eight hundred thousand yen by three hundred thousand yen” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the past perfect is better in the sub sentence in the forth sentence like he forget he had been told not to walk.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say “it is pointed to us that…” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say “fell on them” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your feedback and informative comments as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say “left it open” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say “I think it happened when…”in the second sentence.
