Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ the” is necessary before initiative like “ took the initiative” in the 4th sentence.
Thank you, David! I didn't come up wih the words""lantern even though it was a simple and familiar word. I'll keep working.
Thank you as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ categorize words by color” in the last sentence.
Dear teacher David san Thank you for your prompt corrections and your understandable answer which always comes back with a lot of exsamples. Referring to my question, now that I have understood the syntax, I can compose example sentences: "Now that her children are grown up, she wants to start working again." and then in order to reverse the meaning, "even now that her children are grown up, she wants to take care of them." What confused me was that I had made a false cutting line and then I had read the sentence with the break line between "now" and " that." I think that consistant in word using is important and find "handwriting or typed" to be inconsistent. I should correct to "handwriting or typing" ,which describes actions more clearly. I see, X affects Y, while X has an effect on Y. I was taken aback that: "Thinking" uncountable and a common expression: "get my thoughts in order" Best regards,
Thank you again, David! It was my first time to hear the word "inflatable pool." We call it "vinyl pool" in Japan. I've also learned that it is better not to omit a relative pronoun. I will request you soon.
Hello, David. How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm flattered to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your feedback and comments on how I can use each wording better!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn The present perfect is better with the third sentence like “The scar I gave him has remained for his whole life.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ I got a debit card” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ hit my friend’s head with an aluminum hubcap” in the first sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for your checking my essay. I believe your comment will greatly help me learn English. I hope that l have another chance to have you read my writing. Best,
Thank you always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the good idiom “ for the first time in a long while.”
What a quick response, Mr.David! Seriously?! I wrote the composition correctly? Cozyyyyy!! It was the only point I was disappointed. I will keep writing, so could you please not be tired of my composition? Thank you so much for your efforts!
