Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ one of the good old days” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a different view from her about that story”in that story.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ event” is better than scene in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition was almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ the solitary deaths” in the plural.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the first sentence should be in the progressive like “ things are not going smoothly…”
Thank you for your super fast edition.
Dear David san Thank you for your quick advice, which are full of a lot of useful tips. 1. to have a blank facial expression and to have a face mask. I mean the former, but the latter is also interesting. 2. "a person who conceals their emotions." This is the type of a person I would like to become. 3. "say" is VT, "speak" is VI. I see. 4."a productive member of society" This is a good adult. 5. "The way he spoke gave me the impression that he didn't like me." I don't need to put "how " after the way. It's good, I see. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ a” is necessary before futon like “ a futon.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ it was a call about the cancellation” in the third sentence
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ have my teeth fixed on that day” is better in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ as I determined to do” is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “…apply yo be an accountant “ is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “…claim to be Christian “ is better in the third sentence.
