Thank you for your quick edition. I am happy to know it’s better to say “ make sure his identification was genuine.”
Teacher David Thank you very much for your thoughtful correction. Your correction with alternative are very helpful for me. I saw your profile and found that you’re a Japanese speaker! It made me feel a sense of familiarity. I look forward to working with you soon. Maru
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad that you changed my last sentence into the one like exactly what I wanted to express.
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know “from” is better than” for” like rental fees from my condominiums.
Hello, David. Thank you for reading my essay. I was impressed by your detailed and clear explanation, and your "well done" encourages me to study English. I will request you next time!
教えていただいた例文をモノにしたら、もっと自由に書けるようになると実感しています。 なるべく新たな英作文の機会で取り入れ、表現力を高めたいです。
Thank you for your quick edition. I am sorry that a lot of my unclear description confused you. First, as for chocolates and cookies, The picture on the box looked like chocolate but actually they were cookies.Second, as for numbers of the box and chocolate, I bought 5 boxes and each box contained 5pirces of chocolate. As for “when”, you are right. After coneing back to Japan from Vienna, I opened the boxes. I am happy that you mentioned your unclear parts. Thank you for that.
いつも迅速かつ丁寧な添削に感謝しています。 今の目標は短時間で書けるようになること。 David先生の掲げる例文には、あまり難しい単語が使われていないことが私にとってはとても良いです。 知っている基本的な単語でも、あらゆる表現方法があることを教えていただいています。
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know “ feel close to nature” is more common to use.
Thank you for your quick response! I read it and understood it very well. Your explanations were very helpful. Thank you very much!
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know it should be “a” like “ a Danube cruise tour and a city bus tour.
毎回印刷して訂正箇所をマーカーで色付けし復習しています。 例文もとても参考になります。 親切で丁寧な添削と的確なアドバイスに心から感謝しています。
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know you say “on a package tour “ and “ where the seats are close together” , which were difficult for me to write in English.
Thank you for your quick edition. I am happy to know “ The round trip transportation took days” sounds natural.
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know “go through a shopping mall” is better than “go down a shopping mall.”
