Hi David, Thank you for reviewing my composition with very detailed explanations! I have a question about the explanation of “Must be” referring to my last sentence. You said it sounds more like you're speculating about something that “someone else is experiencing.” It means “Must be” is ONLY used in this case, doesn’t it? like… ・A: I’m going to Disneyland. B: Oh, you must be so excited! ・A: I just worked a 12-hour shift. B: Whoa! You must be tired! ・A: My sister has been in a really bad mood since I got engaged. B: Oh no. She must be jealous. Are there any exceptions? Thank you in Advance. I’m looking forward to asking you to check my next compositions again soon! Best regards, Kohei
Thank you for your checking and I was happy for you to praise me. I'm looking forward to next time to send you my essay again.
Thank you for your polite correction. I learned a lot.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ on second thought.”
Dear David, Thank you very much for your quick response to me. I have noticed that I didn't use "the" with a correct grammar. And, I didn't understand the difference between "hope" and "goal". I should practice to use these words and master correct grammar. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a habit of asking…”
Dear David Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn” the present past” is better in the second sentence.
It’s hard to describe things we see in our daily life because I am in Japan and have no opportunity to use English. Thank you for suggesting a lot of corrections!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn” the present past” is better than” the present” in the first sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for your polite review of my text. I try to use neighborhood instead of area, but I understand that this isn't natural. And I need to use which instead of where. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn” types “ are better than “ perspective.”
Hello David, Thank you for reviewing my composition! It's very interesting to know the difference between kind of a something vs a kind of something, and why people put an apostrophe before "cause". Besides, I found out how vague the sentences I wrote were with your review. I'm gonna try to make my sentences much clearer :) Thank you always, have a great weekend! Best wishes, Kohei
Hi David, Thank you for your detailed reviews! According to sentence1, "the tenth floor, which has two apartments." is what I wanted to say!. Now I understand the difference between apartment and room, thank you! About sentence2, I want to spell a word in the Canadian way, because I learned English in Toronto, Canada. Thank you for letting me share the difference between story vs storey. Regarding sentence3, I wanted to write "We can see the tower named Tokyo Skytree well, but a new building under construction is starting to get in our way." Your explanation tells me how tense important is. However, I’ve never heard of the phrase "vantage point”. I appreciate it. About sentence4, The grammar rules and the nuances are very interesting! I learned a lot from your explanation!! Thank you!!! I have a question about the pre-packaged food that you mentioned in sentence5. A pre-packaged food, ready-to-eat food, and prepared food… Which expression is the most common in Canada? I look forward to asking you to check my next composition. Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
Dear David, Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I always review your suggestions well, and they are helpful for me. Have a good day tomorrow! Best regards, Shota
