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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to have learned “ the” is nessary before “easier” in he 3rd sentence like “ the easier choice.”

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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to have learned the active voice is better than the passive voice for the second sentence like “strangers might find out ...”

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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am sorry I made a mistake in the first sentence. This story was about the time when my father died. SoI should have written “ my mother and I” rushed to my father’s hospital where my father was hospitalized, withought my father.

Thank you for your response. I understand well !

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Thank you for your super fast edtion. I am glad to have learned it is not a period but comma like “1,896.” In the first sentence “in” is corrected like “ in.” In the last sentence “ more” is corrected like “ more.” I wonder why they both are corrected, even though there is no change.

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