Thank you for your feedback and encouraging comments as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I learned it is better to say “ a few glasses of alcohol” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I learned it is better to say “ I had been worried…”in the second sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for your kind correction. Your warm message encouraged me very much. I will read your explanation again to improve my English. Kyoko Mori
Thank you for your super fast edition. I learned it is better to say “ in time to not stain my pants”in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I like the phrase “ even after sticking to doing it for 5 minutes.”
Thank you for proofreading my writing! Your examples are so helpful, I read aloud repeatedly!!! I learnt a lot again. I'm so happy to read your every comment.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition this time is almost perfect.
Thank you for your careful explanation of my mistake. Especially, I learned for the first time that "one" cannot be used for uncountable nouns. Also, thank you for the useful minutes at the end, which are really beneficial as well. I will review it thoroughly.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the present perfect is better in the last sentence like “ Once I have decided…”
Thank you for your feedback and comments. They are really helpful and encouraging!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say “ pictures that look exactly or roughly the same.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad that my composition this time is almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to use “ would” in the 4th sentence like “they would know I have received their junk emails.”
Thank you, teacher David, for your kind message. See you soon. Haruko
