Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean “the active voice” is better in the second sentence like “ the live videos “froze,” not the live videos “were frozen.”
Thank you for your correction and encouraging comments! I am glad that I can get my routine back :) I learned to say "to keep track of the time" and "such that" and I would like to use them in my future writings!
Thank you so much for your correction as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the way you say “3 of those 5 km are arcade shopping mall.”
Thank you for your useful feedback as always. Composing sentences to describe pictures is good exercise for me and I always enjoy working on them! Tomoo
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean you say,” first the customers on the left side, next the customers in the middle seats and finally the customers on the right side.
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the preposition “ on” is necessary before “zoom in” like “zoom in on the landscape.”
Thank you for all the corrections. I think I understand the corrected word, preposition and word order. I would like to practice again so that I can write natural English.
Thank you so much for your correction! 1) This is all correct! "Barely missed the train" means you weren't able to board the train. If you did board the train right before it left, I would say "barely caught the train"; I think you meant this, but I'm not sure. I wanted to say that I barely caught the train! I really appreciate your help!! 1) This is all correct, although we usually say that you got your sleep "last night" because you wake up in the morning after sleeping during the night. I was wondering if I should use "last night" or "morning" when I wrote this diary entry. I knew that you show me which usage is correct! Thank you.
Thank you so much for your correction! I really like your correction style.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the good expression “ the name of the student who got that score.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to lean the good word “housework” instead of home chores.
