Thank you for your advice. Talking about the sentence you pointed me out, I wanted to express that I can't help laughing and worrying (about people who want to gain "like" and their future). Have a nice weekend. Thank you so much. mina053750
Thank you for your quick responce. You are right. She is "still" in my hospital. I am happy you corrected my mistake: "She has been in hospitalized." This sentence made me wonder which tense I should use, the past tence or the present tense. Now you let me know the correct tense: the present perfect. I am happy with it.
Thank you for your quick responce. I assume both" ...though of how rich..."and "..thought how rich..." are OK.
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know " they tangle up" better than "they are tangled up."
Thank you for your quick response. I have learned "the past perfect" is better than the past tense in the second sentence like ...one that "had taken" one bite of...
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know "reward " is better than "praise" in the second sentence. I myself wondered which was better, reward or praise. As I wanted to make sure whether "praise" was acceptable, I wrote "praise."
Thank you for your quick reply. I wanted to use "a verb for delusion," but I did not know the verb, so I used the noun "delusion" like I had a delusion.
Thank you for your quick responce and correction. I am glad to know the present tense "bend" is better in the first sentence.
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know it should be "be opened," not "open" in the second sentence.
Thank you for your quick reply. I wanted to know whether you understood my eassy completely. If there is something you are not sure about, I would like you to tell me please.
Thank you for correcting my answer! I liked how you rephrased "pets are~ and being provided for every need" into "and every need is provided for". I've also looked up the word "overtake". ("overtake somebody/something" ~to become greater in number, amount or importance than something else.) I've realised it includes comparison, and may have different nuances in the sentence where I used. So it is better how you edited. Thank you!
Thank you for your quick responce. I am sorry that I misspelled "fingers for figures." In the last sentence it should have been "A bar chart with my weight "figures(numbers)."
Hello Mr. David, Thank you very much for getting back to me so quickly, as usual. I'm happy that I did quite(?) well. Your comments encouraged me a lot. Thank you! Best regards, Isabel
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know "sports clothes" are better than sport clothes. Also, I am glad to know "went" is better than came because I wrote this composition after leaving the gym.
Thank you for editing my short statement! I practiced this essay again with your corrections. I wasn't sure if I used the words right, so it was nice to hear! I just do not know if "things" ("these things have negative impacts") can be used in an exam essay, and I wasn't sure about that.
