Hi David, Thank you for reviewing my composition and giving me lots of alternatives! Travelling is one of my things that I love, so the sentences relating to trip that you gave me are very helpful to make sentences in a different ways. Today, I sent you the next installment of South Africa Trip. I’m looking forward to your review and sending you the third installment of my adventure. Have a great winter holiday! Best wished, Kohei
Hello David, Thank you for reviewing my composition and for lots of advice! It was especially hard to describe how the water was kicked up in sentence 3, but Your explanation was easy and concise to understand always :) I feel I’m in progress every day with your help. I’m looking forward to asking you to check my next composition! Sincerely, Kohei
Hi David, Thank you for reviewing my composition and telling me alternatives! I didn’t know the words GRATES and CLEANING SOLUTION and it sounds like I better off knowing these words to talk about cleaning with English people :) I’m looking forward to asking you to check my next composition! Best wished, Kohei
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the noun phrase “ one foot of snow.”
Dear David San, Thank you for many suggestions to my composition. I’m very happy to know the phrases which I’ve never written before. Describing pictures are difficult but interesting for me.
Hi David, Thank you for reviewing my description! I understand the nuance of the difference between HOLIDAY vs VACATION and NEAR vs NEARBY. What’s more, I’ve never heard the expression of TRIMMING A CHRISTMAS TREE. I’ll try to use it on a post on Facebook to fish for compliments from my English native friends lol I’m looking forward to asking you to check my next composition :) Have a great holiday! Best wished, Kohei
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it should be “groceries” in the first sentence.
Dear David Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the expression “ attach something to something.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “space” is countable like “a space.”
Dear David, Thank you for your comments, which made me happy. Season’s Greetings! Best regards, Shota
Thank you very much for your quick response ! I can learn a lot of things from you. I will try to use what I learned in this lesson when I write next time.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the past perfect is better in the last sentence like”…I had lost it.”
Thank you so much for your quick response ! In the the third sentence, I would like to explain the current trend that the world is coming to recognize and admit the way of thinking of the youth. So, the best and suitable word to describe my thought would be " take over" as you said ! However, I will search for a more modest words than " take over " if possible. . I will put this words into my dictionary in my brain !
Thank you very much again for your instruction ! I can not understand how I should distinguish usages of " the" and "a " depending the situation. I must learn a lot to continue writing more and more.
