Thank you for correcting my answer! I liked how you rephrased "pets are~ and being provided for every need" into "and every need is provided for". I've also looked up the word "overtake". ("overtake somebody/something" ~to become greater in number, amount or importance than something else.) I've realised it includes comparison, and may have different nuances in the sentence where I used. So it is better how you edited. Thank you!
Thank you for your quick responce. I am sorry that I misspelled "fingers for figures." In the last sentence it should have been "A bar chart with my weight "figures(numbers)."
Hello Mr. David, Thank you very much for getting back to me so quickly, as usual. I'm happy that I did quite(?) well. Your comments encouraged me a lot. Thank you! Best regards, Isabel
Thank you for your quick responce. I am glad to know "sports clothes" are better than sport clothes. Also, I am glad to know "went" is better than came because I wrote this composition after leaving the gym.
Thank you for editing my short statement! I practiced this essay again with your corrections. I wasn't sure if I used the words right, so it was nice to hear! I just do not know if "things" ("these things have negative impacts") can be used in an exam essay, and I wasn't sure about that.
Thank you for your quick reply.
Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay promptly. This trip to Egypt is one of the most unforgettable ones for me. I hope ISIS don't expand its power to the country and devastate the historic buildings any more. Have a great sunday! Many thanks as always, Kaori
Hello David, Thank you for your correction and message! I'm glad to hear that this time there was no mistake in my writing. Also, I appreciate a variety of phrases you gave me for the description! Thank you very much for your help as always! I'm looking forward to the next time. Miho
Thank you for your quick answer. I am glad that I was able to understand that we should not write sentences that is redundant and understandable in the situation.
Thank you for your quick reply. I wanted to make sure whether I can use "lined" instead of saying " used" or "wrote" in the last sentence.
Thank you for your edition. I am glad to know it is better to say "a package of two fish" rather than two packed fish.
Hello David, Thank you for your correction and message! I'm happy to read your comment. The use of articles is always difficult to me, but I could deepen my understanding about it this time again. Thank you for your time and support! I'm looking forward to the next time. Miho
Hello David, Thank you for your correction and message! I'm sorry to hear that the forest fires haven't been extinguished yet. Is it usual for them to keep burning such a long time? I find some nouns seem to be used as both countable and uncountable ( when I look them up in a dictionary, it says they're 'C or U' ), which is quite confusing. I appreciate your suggestion. Thank you for your support as always! I'm looking forward to the next time. Miho
Thank you for your edition. I am glad to know you would say" at the front," "on the top," and "on the sides" of the hard."
Hello, Mr. David, Thank you very much for your corrections and comments. I was impressed again you replied me so quick! I learned a lot this time too! Best regards, Isabel
