
David san I appreciate a lot of tips you showed me in your edits, some of which to be written below: I got it what "account" can be more commonly used for. "Thank you for doing a good job as (something)" I see, this collocation needs to be kept in my mind. "Let (someone) (do something)" I realized that "let" implies approval. "if + present, then future" "if + past, then conditional" These syntaxes inspire me. "I am contacting you about a possible business opportunity." I'm interested in how "possible "can be used. Thanks again.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the pat perfect is better in the first sentence like “ one had died and the other had been transferred.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the phrase “ as little of that soup as possible.”

Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I learned something new. I look forward to taking your lesson again.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say“ a habit of something.”

Thank you very much for correcting my essay!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say“ every kid” than “every child.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “ spaghetti” is uncountable so it does not need “ a.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good phrase “ it gave off a spark.”

Thank you for your encouraging comments and your corrections made my sentences really natural!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good phrase “ early the next month.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good phrase “ swap the dates when we guide drivers.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn we do not need “ to” after “ access” that works as a verb.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ I was not feeling good.”

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am sorry about your confusion. You are right as I was referring to a “backpack.”