Thank you for your careful explanation of my mistake. Especially, I learned for the first time that "one" cannot be used for uncountable nouns. Also, thank you for the useful minutes at the end, which are really beneficial as well. I will review it thoroughly.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the present perfect is better in the last sentence like “ Once I have decided…”
Thank you for your feedback and comments. They are really helpful and encouraging!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it is better to say “ pictures that look exactly or roughly the same.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad that my composition this time is almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to use “ would” in the 4th sentence like “they would know I have received their junk emails.”
Thank you, teacher David, for your kind message. See you soon. Haruko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the good phrase “ in a bad mood.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn “ stain” is a bette word in the third to last sentence like “ stained with sauce.”
Thank you.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn iyou say “ click the pencil.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ have gotten used to” in the last sentence.
thanks!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ an English radio program” in the second sentence.
Thank you very much.