
Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to know “ went back to get it” is a more standard expression.

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Thank you for your quick response! I was completely able to understood. gomame

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Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to know “ on the tour alone” is more common.

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Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad to know “the remaining car” is better than “ the left car.”

Hi David-sensei ! Thank you so much for your amazing feedbacks and possible suggestions! I am so thankful for your detailed and great notes. Those are very helpful. I will " talk " to you soon! :) Harumi

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Thank you for your suprisingly quick edition. I am glad to know “was “ is necessary like one car which I thought “was” my guid’s car.

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Thank you for your quick reply. I am glad to know “when” is better that “that” in the first sentence.

Tanks you for your check and correction!

Thank you for your quick edtion. I am glad that you corrected the last sentence: “ so crows will not disperse it.”