Hello David, Thank you for your review! The phrase that I wanted to use in sentence 2 was absolute “skyline”. Besides, I believe there are lots of hints that improve my English skill more, such as “from the window of the car”, “ how to use the highway” and so on. I really appreciate your concise and naturally-based-more-than-grammatically-correct explanation! I’m looking forward to reading your other feedback. Best regards, Kohei
Thank you for your work!!!
Hello David, Thank you for your feedback! I’m really happy to hear that my writing skills continued to be impressive. Your feedback really helps me a lot. This time, I really appreciate the explanation about SEE and how to make the sentence using When and that kind of verbs. What’s more, most Japanese people are struggling to understand the differences between seeing, looking and watching and how to use them correctly, but I feel my understanding of it got much deeper now. By the way, FYI, I used the other account named yamashitamadair, but I’m gonna use this account only. I’m looking forward to asking you to check other compositions as always. Have a great weekend! Best wishes, Kohei
Hello David, Thank you for reviewing my composition and giving me detailed explanations! I especially fun to know the nuance of holding vs putting and balancing. It makes sense :) Your review is always concise and easy to understand! I look forward to asking you to check my next composition! Best wishes, Kohei
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a fellow belieber” and “!exchange the days.”
Hello David, Thank you for your detailed review and alternatives as always! I particularly appreciate the explanation of past/after and look like/seem using your alternatives. I wasn't sure if I made these sentences correctly, but I feel I can make it out confidently. Sorry for the super late reply because I was swamped with lots of things to do. I look forward to asking you to review my other writings. Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
Thank you for your encouragng message. l will keep writing to improve my English skills. I have realized this writing practice works for speaking skill as well. i always appreciate your quick work and feedback. See you soon.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good expression “ kept watching.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the present perfect is better in the first subsentence like “ things have not gone as smoothly...
Thank you for telling me the difference between funny and fun! That really helps. Funny is the exact word I wanted to say. Have a nice day.
Hello David, Thank you for your correction. I was going to ask you the "corrections with explanation" but again, I accidentally pressed "corrections only". I really want to know the meaning of corrections. I will not miss it next time... Thank you.
Dear David, Thank you for your review of my text again. Your comments encourage me to make an effort to master English writing. Because you always send some appropriate information of English grammar to me, I appreciate your kind style of teaching. I hope that I will send my compositions again. Sincerly, Bearmatsu
Hello David, Thank you for your detailed review and alternatives as always! I particularly appreciate your explanations about progressive clause, ceramic thing, and how to describe the things in a cabinet/cupboard. These explanations deepen the understanding my English knowledge! I look forward to asking you to review my other writings. Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ how much money was collected.”
Hello David, Thank you for the late reply and sorry for the very late reply! I started shadowing and watching sitcoms to improve my listening and speaking skills, so I’ve still been dealing with organizing time. As always, your explanations are easy to understand and make my understanding of grammar deeper. I look forward to handing off lots of compositions to you this year too. Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
