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Dear David san Thank you for your informative correction and a kind answer to my question. "the fall in the stock market on the 5th of August" I love this phrase. "less than half of the total value of my assets" I have been longing for using "less" in my sentence. We don't have this kind of word in Japanese, which makes it heard like more natural English. " but this sounds inappropriate because "the economy" does not sound like a problem. I see your point. The economy itself is no problem but a subject. In general, we say "kinds of things" for the plural and "a kind of thing" for the singular. Even if you own multiple stocks that belong to this type of asset, we use the singular "another kind of asset" to introduce one type of asset. I see your point. I just wanted to say a kind among several kinds. Other than these, thank you very much for your kind arternatives. Best regards,
Thank you for your feedback and suggestions to improve my sentences as always!
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