Thank you very much for detailed corrections and alternatives. They are all relevant ;-) to my English improvemment. I always appreciate the summary in your last comment as well. It reminds me of the points I pay a close attention to. Lastly, my apologies for numerous typos. I had to do the writing through my tablet this time. Its typing is clumsy, although I should still not use is as an excuse.
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know the present tense is better than the present perfect in the last sentence like “ understand it more than before.”
Thank you for your quick edition. I wanted to make sure if the phrase “ excusing themselves” is OK to be used in the sentence.
Thank you very much for your kind reply. I wish you a Happy New year!
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know the expression “Paid holidays carry over to the next year
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad that you have recognize me there is no “ to” when a verb comes after make like “ made viewers watch.”
Thank you for giving me a lot of another examples and expressions!
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know “from” is better than “ on” like “from the balcony.”
Dear Mr. David, How are you? Thank you for your e-mail. Your detail explanation is very helpful. I highly appreciate your kind help. Best regards, H. Fukuoka
Thank you for your a lot of advice! Its really helpful. Hope to ask you to revise my diary again soon.
Thank you for your quick edition. In the third sentence your edition is a little different from what I meant. I meant I got a fellow coworker to “exchange my night shift to his.”
Thank you so much for chenging my English!!
Thank you for your quick edition. I am glad to know “ attend a service” is better than “ join a service. “
Thank our for your polite feedbacks! I'll do my best to master these comments.
I read your kind reply and understood well. Thank you very much. And have a great week too!
