Dear David, Thank you very much for your quick response to me. I have noticed that I didn't use "the" with a correct grammar. And, I didn't understand the difference between "hope" and "goal". I should practice to use these words and master correct grammar. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a habit of asking…”
Dear David Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn” the present past” is better in the second sentence.
It’s hard to describe things we see in our daily life because I am in Japan and have no opportunity to use English. Thank you for suggesting a lot of corrections!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn” the present past” is better than” the present” in the first sentence.
Dear David, Thank you for your polite review of my text. I try to use neighborhood instead of area, but I understand that this isn't natural. And I need to use which instead of where. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn” types “ are better than “ perspective.”
Hello David, Thank you for reviewing my composition! It's very interesting to know the difference between kind of a something vs a kind of something, and why people put an apostrophe before "cause". Besides, I found out how vague the sentences I wrote were with your review. I'm gonna try to make my sentences much clearer :) Thank you always, have a great weekend! Best wishes, Kohei
Hi David, Thank you for your detailed reviews! According to sentence1, "the tenth floor, which has two apartments." is what I wanted to say!. Now I understand the difference between apartment and room, thank you! About sentence2, I want to spell a word in the Canadian way, because I learned English in Toronto, Canada. Thank you for letting me share the difference between story vs storey. Regarding sentence3, I wanted to write "We can see the tower named Tokyo Skytree well, but a new building under construction is starting to get in our way." Your explanation tells me how tense important is. However, I’ve never heard of the phrase "vantage point”. I appreciate it. About sentence4, The grammar rules and the nuances are very interesting! I learned a lot from your explanation!! Thank you!!! I have a question about the pre-packaged food that you mentioned in sentence5. A pre-packaged food, ready-to-eat food, and prepared food… Which expression is the most common in Canada? I look forward to asking you to check my next composition. Have a great one! Best regards, Kohei
Dear David, Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I always review your suggestions well, and they are helpful for me. Have a good day tomorrow! Best regards, Shota
Dear David, Thank you for giving me some advices to me again. Though I feel lucky to enjoy learning English, I need to master how to express my thought in English based on correct grammar. I wish I will practice English skills to write on my thoughts. Sincerely, Bearmatsu
Thank you as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to write “ jack-in-the-pulpit.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ plain-tasting food” in the first sentence.
