Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you can say “ he was flatlining.
Dear Teacher David san Thank you for your corrections, which are nice and timely as usual. > -- "resonating between us" describes a relationship between the people in the group "us." Instead, we want to indicate a relationship between us and "Birds Aren't Real" (which isn't included in the group "us"). = I see. I didn't clearly recognize this point. Now I understand that it is important where the resonating happens, inside ourselves or relation with the movement and us. Best Regards, ie1133 ----------
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …in my studying” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ …apologized for giving me a wrong combo…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s okay to say in the past tense in the third sentence like “ Since then, I studied…”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ a custom of drinking…”
Hi David, How are you doing? I'm sorry I am late for sending you stars. Today, I checked your advice neatly. Thanks to you, I understand how to differentiate from "which/that" and "where" judging who take an action with the following verb. Honestly it was complicated every time, so it was so helpful. I played with words you gave me below.....hahaha... 【【 An ill-mannered legislator putting on an ill-fitting shirt which was ill-gotten is always ill-tempered to get the government program and appointed ill-timed to express views, finally he is said to be ill-advised. 】】 Just for my practice....but I think there are these kinds of Japanese legislators based on reality... hahaha.. See you soon ! Yukiko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ my words…” in the last sentence.
Hi David, I'm sorry to be behind giving stars to you. I appreciate your decent correction of my writing. When I wrote my essay, I didn't realize anything. After reading your advice, I came to understand what I was saying and I couldn't help laughing with my sentences like "I would make staff keep clean" and " to raise up the unemployed rate". I feel ashamed a bit, but happy that I've absorbed correct expressions at the same time. Thank for all your support. See you later, Yukiko
Thank you for your corrections and many examples. I like to read your examples. It's very useful.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ filling up at a gas station and filling up my car
Thank you for your correction and comments. They are rally encouraging to have your positive feedback! Tomoo
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn “looked very bad” is better in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the expression “ as little as possible.”
Thank you so much for correcting in detail my sentence!
