Dear Teacher David san Thank you for your prompt and precise, detailed and kind advice. I am grateful for all your tips, among of which I would like to make some comments about. I see "certificate" is an official document. I should have written "certification marks." "The first reason for this is that..." "so they don't match","I would use the present tense for both actions" I see. About an expression for introducing a point, I used a way of an expression in Japanese, but that did not work. About tense, current habitual actions and a hypothetical situation don't match. ""While when a book by a human" is incomplete" I see. This is a Japanese expression way that doesn't work. "I think you meant "I think about what the writer is like"" I see. " Like" is a simple but very useful word. I feel ashamed about having confused "fare" and "fair", "praise" and "prize." I will review them. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad you learn it’s better to say “ my mind went blank.”
Thank you very much for your kind corrections and explanations. They are really helpful for my sentences and I could follow them easily. Especially, your explanations about my grammatical mistakes are easy to understand, so I could learn a lot of grammatical usages. I am delighted and encouraged to read your compliments on the expressions I used. I would like to continue my efforts to be able to write English naturally. I appreciate for your warm support.
Thank you very much
Thank you for your feedback and encouraging comments!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad that my composition is almost perfect.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say” during the day time” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition
Thank you.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say” most of my time last Sunday”in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say” My main tasks are …”in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say” … when I did something” in the first sentence.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to begin with “ Even when” in the second sentence.
