Hi David, Thank you for correcting this essay and offering various sentences. Especially, your comment on "my idea" of the 2nd sentence from the last had the scales fall from my eyes! It is thought-provoking. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you for making my sentences clearer. I try to use the expressions you taught me.
Thank you so much. Your teaching helps me grow!
Thank you so much for teaching me correct and useful English. I'm glad to learn many expressions from you.
Thank you for your quick answer. In this eassy I wanted to make sure if "three times as many soldiers" is Ok. I am hoppy to know the new expression" the invading army."
Thank you so much for understanding what I wanted to write and teaching me the way to write more clearly.
Thank you for your quick responce and letting me know the meaning of "recognize."
Thank you for your corrections! I write down the corrections in the notebook. And I sometimes read them aloud. Thank you very much Kanako
Thank you for correcting my sentences.
Thank you for your quick responce. In the last sentence, what I meant by "expensive and longing whisky" was "expensive wiskyes that I longed for at that time." Thank you for this suggestion. Because of it, I can express my idea correctly or accurately.
Thank you so much for teaching me English kindly!
Thank you for your correction! I always appreciate your detailed explanations.
Thank you for your quick responce. When I wrote this eassy, there were words I was worried about if they were OK: "differences" and "my guess about the sermon. " However, as you mentioned these words in the column, I understood them: "The differences" are better and "my guess about the sermon" is OK. Also, I could undrstand "preachment" is not your familiar word.
Thank you so much for correcting my English. I appreciate it.
Thank you for teaching me very useful expressions.
