Dear Teacher David san Thank you very much for your kind corrections. "the countable "troubles" refers to worries-" I see, that's an interresing point, which makes me associate with a word "an issue." A problem, an issue and trouble as an uncountable word, these three words should be put in my mind seperately. "pay in/with cash," I see. "By cash" is a Japanese collocation. You kindly often make remarks like "something sounds incomplete ", "something sounds awkward", " something sounds unnatural because-- ." I really appreciate these corrections. To read these comments is an useful chance to learn how English is used actually. Among these, "sounds incomplete " interests me the most, "incomplete"? And later in time, I see that this case often has something to do with "how to use verb." To use verbT or verbI correctly is difficult, for we don't have verb usase like this in Japanese. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ make prices as high as possible” in the last sentence.
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Hello David, How are you? Thank you for the corrections on my writing. They are helpful to my study, such as "doubled the number of visitors"in the fourth sentence it's very clear and precise. "business" is an uncountable word, so, I should have checked it on dictionary in advance. Also, I'm glad to read your nice comment. See you next time, Yoko
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the past progress is better in the sub-sentence of the second sentence like “as I was relying on…”
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Dear Teacher David san Thank you very much for your kind advice. "This does not make sense to me because I don't understand -----" I am sorry to have had you confused by my irregular sentence. The last part of the task sentence says "Do you think rescue operations on Mt. Fuji should be charged? Why or why not?" I started making my composition for the first half and for the latter half separately. "The reason for this is clear. " is my answer to the latter half of this assignment. Composing my sentences separately made the flow of my answer inconsistent. I thank you for having understood my intention correctly. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn the good expression” taking on difficult challenges.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “hegemonies.”
