Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ give her something in return” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ keep up with him” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ the total number of pages.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ search for how to solve the problems” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ with a hole sewn shut” in the third sentence.
Thank you for your feedback and comments as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ you should tell me” after “told me” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the past tense is better in the second sentence like “She came to our church every day..”
Thank you for your feedback. You offered me a lot of alternative phrases. They were very useful!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn the progressive is better after the colon like “judging by their looks” in the first sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “hot water runs through them” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your corrections and comments as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “answering the phone” in the singular.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ sign a contract” in the last sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to learn it’s better to say “ these colors.”
