
Thank you for your super fast edition. I like the phrase you wrote “ a symptom of a cold.”

Thank you for your comments, and alternatives! I really appreciate them. Thanks again.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned just “ exercise” is OK in the second sentence.

Hi David, Thank you so much for your comments on the short essay. Your advice always helps me a lot. I hope you do not mind even if I frequently request you hehe Regards, Kii

Thank you very much for your corrections! I appreciate your glammar explanation!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned “the previous day” is better than “yesterday” in my mind context.

Thank you for suggestions and all. Very helpful. I really appreciate your encouraging comments on this essay. Hope to work with you again! Kii

Thank you for your edditing. I could understand last to three sentence especially. I want to be able to use this sentence next time.

Thank you, David! I like your advice! See you soon!

Thank you for your kind and detailed review. Also at this time, I have been able to learn a lot from you! And your comment encourages me, and my feeling to want to improve my English becomes strong more and more. I would like to continue improving my English. Thank you so much!

Thank you, David!! I appreciate your advise :) See you soon!!

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned “ in my brain “ is unnecessary in the third sentence.

Thanks.

Thank you for your super fast edition. I am glad to have learned “my bill” is better than “a bill.”

Thank you for your clear explanation and giving me usuful example sentenses!