Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ after that…”in the last sentence.
Dear Teacher David san Thank you. I appreciate your kind advice. "the luxury items are composed of rights (as if the rights are an ingredient within the items themselves)." # I see. What I wrote was odd. I should have written" The rights include taking our favorite items as one of its contents." "Note that "favorite" is usually used with a possessive because this adjective indicates a personal connection." # I see. It interests me very much. "The expression "have (something) at your disposal" means it's available to you and you can use it. This is mainly used with things like information and money," #I see. I have found that "disposal" is often used around waste matters. "The tobacco tax has proven that taxing a product can lead to reduced consumption." "The tobacco tax has been proven effective." "has been a great success." # I love these expressions,for they are simple and easy to understand. "To indicate that we're speculating about that hypothetical situation, I used "if + past, then conditional" # I forgot to use this standard formula. I will keep it in mind. "to use the word order "consume the item less," with "less" after the object. In this case, "less" feels like it's connected to the verb rather than the object:" # I see. It seems me an adverb. Besides these, there are a lot of tips for compositions you kindly extended,which I appreciate. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I have learned it’s better to say “ the clothes.”
Hello David, I'm so happy to read your alternations on my submission. They are exactly what I wanted to write but I couldn't. I want to be able to write like you. Thank you so much. Hope to see you soon. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I have learned it’s better to say “ a piece of clothing.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I have learned it’s better to say “ which nurse” in the second sentence.
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I learned the phrase “ pile up to.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I learned the noun phrase “ a few spare moments.”
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that I learned you say “ do a chemical reaction.”
Thank you for your feedback and comments as always!
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy that my composition is perfect.
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Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn it’s better to say “ in an online diary.”
Dear David san Thank you for your prompt advice, which is very informative and understandable. "I don't particularly care that", "I don't particularly care about" #, I see, "care" is used in this sense. In Japanese, this word is mainly used in the sense of "take care of someone in trouble." "When it's used without an object, "drink" often refers to drinking alcohol" #, Now I have got the solution how to use "drink", which have been annoying me for decades. "if + present, then future", "if + past, then conditional" #, I see these two main "if clauses", your explanation of which is very understandable. "we convert it into a noun phrase by adding "the fact that" #, I see. English needs to add "the fact that" for a noun phrase, which looks me like a too overblown. "They're just using the supply issues as an excuse to charge more for their product." #, I love this expression, which sounds me adult like or mature or sophisticated. Best regards,
Thank you for your super fast edition. I am happy to learn you say “ the New Year’s holidays.”
